Audience Feedback

My tutor watched the beginning of my trailer to establish the positive parts to it and the bits I need to improve on. From watching it back she agrees that it is looking like a conventional romantic comedy trailer.
She also commented on the bits I need to tweak to make it even more like a conventional trailer.

• The opening music reminded my tutor of a finale' to a film. I need to chose something more introductory.
• She liked the track 'She's so Lovely' by Scouting For Girls but I should keep it all instrumental and cut the singing out.
• At the beginning it needs to pick up pace instantly so the audience is drawn in immediately and want to see the film.
• I need to make sure I don't cut the actors speech too quickly.
• The final thing is to crop in closer when the actor of Michael is dancing so he is the main focus in the shot.

I now have two weeks to complete the main task and subs and I feel that this will be achievable. I have worked hard on this project and I am happy with the progress I have made from AS to A2.