Audience Feedback from the target audience

I asked a member of my target audience to look at the trailer so far. I told her that there will be a voice over added so there is no need to comment on this. I needed to know what I needed to add so the audience would be able to understand the storyline and she was very helpful. I will film her suggestion on Wednesday when the actors are available (lets just hope it doesn't snow.) I will need to re-film Gracie running away from Michael as well so that the continuity stays the same. At least my target audience likes the trailer!

I have also had an idea to challenge the voice over conventions. In most trailers there is a mail voice over so I may record myself doing the voice over and see how this fits.